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Cover letter schreiben Englisch - USA Praxissemester

 
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GhostKA



Anmeldungsdatum: 12.11.2008
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BeitragVerfasst am: 15.04.2014, 13:08    Titel: Cover letter schreiben Englisch - USA Praxissemester

Hallo zusammen,

ich habe vor ein Praxissemester in den USA zu machen und habe jetzt einen Cover letter erstellt. Mich würde mal interessieren was Ihr davon haltet?
Ich bin mir nicht bei allen Formulierungen bzw. Wörtern sicher von daher wäre es super wenn der eine oder andere mich verbessern kann? Manchmal verliert man auch einfach den Überblick über mögliche Fehler Sehr glücklich

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Dear sir or madam,

As a young and inquisitive infrastructure management student, I am always in ambition for new challenges. The good reputation within the building industry and the extensive business structure, but as well the perspective of an interesting and diversified workplace, sets the ***Unternehmen*** on top of my selection list for my Internship.

Currently I am in the third semester and in the next one I have to do a compulsory semester. During my study progress I acquired a solidly basic knowledge in the fields of building material science, project management and business management, whichever I now want to use in practice. Personally, I am extremely adaptive and greedy for knowledge and I always want to complete my work responsible to fully satisfy the people around me.

While I was administrating a team sport for years I have become really self-confident and STOP to a communicative leader. Even in difficult situations I am always considered to keep cool, analyze the setting and make the right decisions. My excellent ability to work in a team has given me a pretty good reputation in my team and at the club I play for. Furthermore, I also learned that achievements can be reached much more easily with an excellent working team and a good atmosphere. My intern at the *** GmbH proved that more than only once. According to the constructor I have managed to coordinate every single involved person without having any trouble. I even improved the workflow of some transactions and my ideas helped decreasing the amount of work and material usage.

For me personally, this internship is an important step for my future life. As soon as I finish my studies, I want to emigrate to the USA and of course I want to gain as much experience as possible in advance. I am sure the ***Unternehmen*** and I will both benefit from that internship and as soon as I get a positive reply, I will apply for the necessary J1 visa. If you have any further questions feel free to contact me at anytime.

I look forward hearing from you

Yours faithfully

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Vielen Dank schon mal an alle die mir weiterhelfen.

Grüße
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Linut1991



Anmeldungsdatum: 11.12.2014
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Wohnort: Schallstadt

BeitragVerfasst am: 11.12.2014, 12:28    Titel:

Hi GhostKA,

ich habe gemerkt dass es schon eine weile her dass das gepostet wurde aber ich wollte Dir trotzdem helfen, falls den Text in Zukunft noch weiter verwendet wird. Vor allem, vielleicht hilft es jemand anderen.

"Dear sir or madam,"

Hier könnte man sogar "To whom it may concern" verwenden da es etwas lockerer wirkt. In Amerika ist es formell aber doch etwas locker in Verhältnis zu Deutschland. Natürlich ist es am besten wenn man eine Name hat und das bekommt man meistens mit einem kurzen Telefonat.

"As a young and inquisitive infrastructure management student, I am always in ambition for new challenges. The good reputation within the building industry and the extensive business structure, but as well the perspective of an interesting and diversified workplace, sets the ***Unternehmen*** on top of my selection list for my Internship."

As a young and inquisitive infrastructure management student, my ambition always leads me to seek out new challenges. While currently seeking out internship opportunities in the field, I am particularly attracted to the position with ***Unternehmen***, which is known for its solid reputation within the building industry, its extensive business structure and providing a unique and diversified workplace.

While I was administrating a team sport for years I have become really self-confident and STOP to a communicative leader. Even in difficult situations I am always considered to keep cool, analyze the setting and make the right decisions. My excellent ability to work in a team has given me a pretty good reputation in my team and at the club I play for. Furthermore, I also learned that achievements can be reached much more easily with an excellent working team and a good atmosphere. My intern at the *** GmbH proved that more than only once. According to the constructor I have managed to coordinate every single involved person without having any trouble. I even improved the workflow of some transactions and my ideas helped decreasing the amount of work and material usage.

While administering a team sport for several years, it allowed me to develop my skills in effectively communicating and helped strengthen my own personal self-confidence. In difficult situations, this experience has taught me in difficult times how to remain poised, analyze the setting and make fact based decisions. Because of this, I have developed an excellent reputation within the team. Furthermore, I also learned that achievements can be reached more easily with an excellent working team and a positive atmosphere. My internship at the *** GmbH was proof of this. Based on feedback by the constructor, I managed to effectively coordinate every individual and was even able to improve the workflow of various transactions. My input also helped in saving valuable raw material usage and labor.

For me personally, this internship is an important step for my future life. As soon as I finish my studies, I want to emigrate to the USA and of course I want to gain as much experience as possible in advance. I am sure the ***Unternehmen*** and I will both benefit from that internship and as soon as I get a positive reply, I will apply for the necessary J1 visa. If you have any further questions feel free to contact me at anytime.

For me personally and professionally, an internship with ***Unternehmen*** would be an important step in my growth. After completing my studies, my goal is to immigrate to the United States with the hope to gain as much insight as possible beforehand. I am confident that ***Unternehmen*** would benefit greatly from my experince and I would be given the opportunity to grow professionally, as well. Being of German citizenship, if I am allowed the opportunity, I would promptly apply for the J1 Visa and supply all necessary documentation. If you should have any further questions, please feel free to contact me at anytime.

I look forward to the opportunity of discussing my qualifications in greater detail.

Ohne Name=Yours faithfully Mit Name=Yours sincerely
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